Applying to a Mock Reality Show -- 模擬リアリティショーに申し込みする (updated)

Here's my example:
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I Want to Go to Mars

• I live in Japan now, in a suburb of Osaka. It's actually not a bad place, convenient to stores, parks, and public transportation.

• I am busy with teaching and studying, so life is good.

• But I don't like convenience, and being busy all the time gets me down. I want some excitement and adventure.

• I want to go to Mars!

• Going to Mars has been my dream since I was a child.

• I want to build a colony on Mars and try to figure out really interesting problems, like cultivating edible plants in Martian soil and keeping a pressure dome on Martian sand filled with air.

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I finally got time to get some of your contributions posted, without (I hope) personal details.

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I want to move to the country!

Now I live in a suburb of Osaka city. It's a beautiful town surrounded by nature, and I like it a lot.

But I don't really feel comfortable with the city atmosphere that I feel every day when I go to school. The morning train is always very crowded.

After school I have to go to cram school. I don't like cram school. I am always totally tired when I get home. I'm really stressed out all the time.

In my new home, I'll probably go jogging every day after school. And I'll definitely never go to cram school

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Australia

I visited Australia on a short home-stay program. I really enjoyed the lifestyle and the climate.

I want to go back and stay, to become an adult there and get a job, and settle down.

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The Country

The city is too fast-paced, and out of touch with nature, for me.

I dream of moving to the county where I can live a slow life, surrounded by beautiful nature.

When I move there, I will fill a big garden with many beautiful flowers. I will also grow various kinds of fruits and vegetables, and I will cook with what I grow.

And I will have time to enjoy it all in my slow lifestyle.

I'm looking forward to my dream coming true!

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The City!

The country has nothing to do, and no one to meet.


I'd like to move to the city because I can meet many people there. The experience will surely affect me for the better and help broaden my outlook. I will be able to try many new things and find new interests. For instance, I will be able to meet people from all over the world and discuss things with them. It will give me a chance to hear about their culture and their way of thinking.

Moving to the city is a challenge that I want to take on.

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New York!

I live in Middlehill, where it is really quiet and peaceful. I feel bored  everyday. It' s so dull.

I really want to move to a place where I can hang out with my many friends and buy lots of cool clothes. So I think NY is the best place for me. In New York, I will be clubbing all night for sure.

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Hawaii

I lived in Hawaii for a while when I was young. There are beautiful beaches and lots of friendly people. There are no beautiful beaches near where I live now, and people mostly keep to themselves.

When I was young, I swam in the beautiful sea. And I went shopping at Hawaiian stores. I miss those now. I'd like to move back.

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